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A Craptastic Love Poem by ~Feloss:iconFeloss:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Spoken Word


There is something special with the way he looks at you;
that look that truly makes you feel like you are the one person that he lives for.

There is something wonderful about the sweet nothings he whispers into your ear, when you lie together in the dark; they feel so sincere, so real.

And you don't have to tell him how you feel; he knows, he understands.

And in the morning, when he's gone, you feel an ache in your chest;
that longing, the feeling of hopelessness when he's not around to comfort you.

When he returns in the evening, you tell him that you've missed him, that you wished he'd never leave again...

He explains to you; you will never truly be apart, for your destinies are entwined, your fates have joined. And with a thought you'll be together again, as long as you believe in eachothers love.
©2009 ~Feloss
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Author's Comments

I hope you had a good laugh at my expense.

Ah well. I've got an excuse for this piece of lameness.
You see, it was a project for school and thus it was written at 11 PM the night before it was due. And during the span of an hour.
Also, it was written together with ~Ralekhou.
Rallie and I weren't exactly at the top of our productiveness at the moment. As is the custom during such circumstances that involves one certain Usagi and myself.
It was written last year, too.

Ok. Done trying to excuse my lameness.
Agh, long comment is long. And quite unnecessary. But obviously you read it anyway. And you will most likely keep reading it. Even though it doesn't actually say anything. But you just can't stop reading it, amirite? What did I tell you, you're still reading! Ok, seriously. Stop reading now. Stop it! You know what, I don't care anymore. Keep reading if that's what you want!
Hmm, I wonder what I'll have for dinner tonight...

...Had enough yet? Yes? Ok. I guess I'll stop now.

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*Ralekhou Apr 5, 2009, 2:27:54 AM
You wrote abort instead of about :nod:

I think it's... better than lame x3 Maybe a little predictable, but well... The teacher loved it. LOVED it.

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~Feloss Apr 5, 2009, 3:54:11 AM
WTF ABORT!? :XD:
No, it is lame. But our teacher loved it, yes. So the lameness doesn't matter.

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*Ralekhou Apr 5, 2009, 9:16:16 AM
Kay, sure xD

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Poop on everything that is WRONG!!
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~lakritscaten Apr 16, 2009, 1:51:39 PM
HEY A CRAPTASTIC POEM!
i LOVE the begining!!!
the end is a lite cliche thought, BUT IT DOESNT MATTER!

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Drink more milk.
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~Feloss Apr 17, 2009, 10:31:46 AM
I never claimed to be satisfied with it. In fact, I do not know whether to laugh or cry when I read it. Mostly, I simply avoid going anywhere near it.

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