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I Hate You by ~Feloss:iconFeloss:



I hate you.
I hate your hair,
I hate your eyes.
But more than everything
I hate your smile.
You are so beautiful,
And I'm not.
Maybe I don't hate you,
Maybe I hate myself.
For loving you.
Maybe I hate you
for being a girl,
when I am a girl too.
©2007-2008 ~Feloss
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Submitted: October 9, 2007
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Okay, not about me, just got into my head a couple of hours ago, and it wouldn't leave until I wrote it down. Heh. Hope it's acceptable at least. Never tried anything like it before. Probably wrong category too, if so, could someone please correct me? ^^;

EDIT 9/12-07:
Whoa! A lot more people than I thought liked this! Thanks! :D

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~Ralekhou:iconRalekhou: Oct 10, 2007, 8:44:16 AM Mood: Love
*gasp* WOW! It's really great! I think it's worth a "fave"! :star:
~lakritscaten:iconlakritscaten: Nov 12, 2007, 9:07:25 AM
wow, i really like this one.. your good at writing ^^

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~Feloss:iconFeloss: Nov 13, 2007, 12:06:12 PM
Naw, I'm not very good...

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=plus-i-minus:iconplus-i-minus: Nov 20, 2007, 1:02:03 PM
very good and expressive poem. Very mature point of view

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~Feloss:iconFeloss: Nov 21, 2007, 8:37:25 AM
Thank you! :)

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~4444chloe4444:icon4444chloe4444: Dec 8, 2007, 2:01:20 PM
no, ive been through this. really hit the nail well done!!!
~Feloss:iconFeloss: Dec 8, 2007, 4:43:15 PM
Thanks! :D

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